Young Author Piece: "I Believe"

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Young Author Piece: "I Believe" Jul 15, 2014 1:16:17 GMT jenjie likes this

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Post by msliz on Jul 15, 2014 1:16:17 GMT

I was going through DD's 5th grade Language Arts journal and thought the Peas might enjoy a well thought out bit of writing.

I Believe

by DD, grade 5

I believe that you can accomplish anything if you work hard enough

I believe that the world should work together instead of fighting

I believe in not using force or violence

I believe that wealthy people should give to the poor

I believe that all Minecraft sheep are evil and annoying

I believe that Minecraft sheep should have to wear colored contacts over their RED EYES

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karen Full Member Posts: 407 Jun 26, 2014 14:01:12 GMT	Young Author Piece: "I Believe" Jul 15, 2014 1:26:57 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by karen on Jul 15, 2014 1:26:57 GMT I really love the way she combined a rather mature view of the world in the first few lines with her thoughts on Minecraft in the last few lines. Well done!
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smokey2471 RefuPea Fixture Posts: 796 Jul 10, 2014 16:20:29 GMT	Young Author Piece: "I Believe" Jul 15, 2014 1:49:17 GMT via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by smokey2471 on Jul 15, 2014 1:49:17 GMT Cute!
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Young Author Piece: "I Believe"

Post by msliz on Jul 15, 2014 1:16:17 GMT

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